Saturday, March 7, 2009

The 16 Error-ID Categories You Need To Know (Complete SAT Grammar Rules Part 1))














Please note that the following rules have been derived from an extensive study of numerous College Board tests, not just the ones in the Blue Book. Some of them may therefore be difficult to apply if you are using a commercially produced prep book (e.g. Kaplan, Princeton Review) whose tests are designed as approximations of the real thing and sometimes do not contain errors in exactly the same format as those created by the College Board. I can guarantee, however, that the following represents a summary of virtually every error that appears on the actual Error-Identification section of the SAT. 

If you'd like more in-depth explanations of these rules, along with extensive exercises, please consider ordering a copy of "The Ultimate Guide to SAT Grammar." 

Error-Identification Categories

1) Subject-Verb Agreement
2) Verb Tense
3) Pronoun Case
4) Antecedent Pronoun (Pronoun Agreement)
5) Adjective vs. Adverb
6) Parallelism
7) Prepositions
8) Faulty Comparisons
9) Comparatives vs. Superlatives
10) Double negatives/Double positives
11) Word Pairs
12) Noun Agreement
13) Relative Pronouns
14) Coordinating Conjunctions
15) Usage
16) Redundancy

Note: while other kinds of errors (e.g. misplaced modifiers) may occasionally appear, they are extremely rare and are therefore not covered here. Although you can expect to find errors from a number of categories included in each section, the first four categories (Verb and Pronoun Errors) generally appear most frequently. It is therefore recommended that you take some time to familiarize yourself with the kinds of sentence structures in which they appear. The remaining categories are listed in the approximate order frequency.

In the examples below, the correct answers are given in parentheses.

Although some of the examples below are taken from College Board-created questions, the majority are simplified versions intended to illustrate particular grammatical principles.

1) Subject-Verb Agreement

A. Subject – Parenthetical clause – Verb

Ex: Galaxies, far from being randomly scattered throughout the galaxy, appears (appear) to be distributed in bubble-shaped patterns.

Whenever you encounter a parenthetical clause (a clause set off by commas that can be removed without affecting the fundamental meaning of the sentence), cross it out and check subject-verb agreement

B. Subject – Prepositional phrase – Verb

A prepositional phrase is, quite simple, a phrase that begins with a preposition (in the box, under the table, over the hill, etc.). Very often these will be inserted between subjects and verbs to distract from subject-verb disagreements. Prepositional phrases always end when you get to the verb.

Ex: Changes in the balance of trade seems (seem) remote from everyday concerns, but they can drastically affect how we spend our money.

If you don’t see an error the first time you read a sentence, try crossing out prepositional phrases and checking for subject-verb agreement.

C. Prepositional Phrase –Verb – Subject

Ex: Along the Loup Canal in Nebraska extend (extends) a series of parks, lakes, and trails owned and operated by the Loup power district.

D. There is/There are & There has/There have

There is/has = Singular noun
There has/have = Plural noun

Ex: There has (have) been many questions raised about the handling of the company’s finances.

E. Neither/Nor + Verb

Neither (Singular Noun) Nor (Singular Noun) = Singular Verb

Ex: Neither the book nor the pencil is sitting on the table.

NOT Neither the book nor the pencil are sitting on the table.

On the SAT, singular nouns connected by neither/nor are only incorrectly paired with plural verbs; plural nouns connected by neither/nor are not tested.

Important:

-“Group” nouns (e.g. company, school, city, country, committee, jury, etc.) = singular.

-Each = Singular

-A number (of) = Plural BUT The number = Singular

-Gerunds when used as subjects (e.g. Constructing new skyscrapers often takes many months) = Singular.


2) Verb Tense

A. Tense Consistency

Sentences that start in the past should generally stay in the past; sentences that start in the present should generally stay in the present.

Ex: Since serious drama unaccompanied by music was forbidden in all but two London theatres during the eighteenth century, Queen’s theatre quickly becoming (became) an opera house.

B. Present Perfect vs. Simple Past

These questions are almost always recognizable by the inclusion of a date or a time period in the sentence.  Any sentence that includes a date in the past or mentions a historical period should always contain a verb in the Simple Past (e.g., went, drank, sang), NOT in the Present Perfect (has gone, has drunk, has sung). 

Ex: During the nineteenth century, Charles Dickens has become (became) one of the most famous British novelists.

However, sentences containing ‘Since’ and ‘For’ require the Present Perfect (e.g., I have gone to this school since 2005; I have gone to this school for five years).

C. Would vs. Will

Will and Would get switched with one another; if "will" is underlined, stick in "would" and vice-versa

Ex: William Shakespeare, who will (would) become the greatest English dramatist, was born in 1564.

In general, "would" should not be used in a sentence with present-tense verbs, and "will" should not be used in a sentence with past-tense verbs. 

D. Gerunds vs. Infinitives

Gerunds and Infinitives are switched with one another

Infinitive replaced with gerund: Though she was one of the few women of her time gaining (to gain) international prominence, Clara Barton would not have described herself as a proponent of women's rights.

Gerund replaced with infinitive: Laryngitis causes the vocal cords and surrounding tissue to swell, thus preventing the vocal cords to move (from moving) freely.

E. Past Participle vs. Simple Past

In these questions, the simple past rather than the past participle will be incorrectly paired with a form of the verb “To Have.”

Ex: My little brother has grew (grown) two inches during the past year.

F. Past Perfect

Past Perfect = Had + Past Participle (e.g. I had seen, I had gone, He had thrown, etc.)

When a sentence contains two actions or events that occurred in the past, the action that occurred first should be in the past perfect

The phrase ‘by the time’ is usually a tip-off that the past perfect is required.

Ex: By the time it adjourned, the committee made (had made) several important decisions.

Action #1: The committee made several important decisions
Action #2: The committee adjourned


3) Pronoun Case

Ex: After two weeks, the teacher finally gave Robert and I (me) back our report.

Trick: What goes for singular, goes for plural

Would you say, ‘The teacher gave I back my report?’ Obviously not. So you wouldn’t say ‘the teacher gave Robert and I back our report’ either.

Subject Pronouns tested on the SAT: 

He/She
We 
They 

Object Pronouns tested on the SAT:

Me
Him/Her
Us
Them 

Any pronoun that follows a preposition must be an object pronoun 

Important: Between you and me, NOT Between you and I 


4) Antecedent-Pronoun 

An antecedent is a noun that a pronoun refers to. In the sentence, “Jamie picked up the ball and threw it,” the ball is the antecedent and it is the pronoun.

One and You

You...You
One...One

Ex: If one wants to avoid insect invasions, you (one) should refrain from leaving crumbs lying on your floor. 

Singular vs. Plural

Singular nouns are referred to by singular pronouns; plural nouns are referred to by plural pronouns.

Any singular noun referring to a person: 

He or She/His or Her

Any singular noun referring to a thing: 

It/Its

Any plural noun referring to person or thing: 

They/Their

Ex: When the economy does poorly, interest in them (it) becomes all-abiding.

Ex: A person who wishes to become an Olympic-caliber athlete must devote virtually all of their (his or her) time to training. 

BUT: People who wish to become an Olympic-caliber athlete must devote virtually all of their time to training. 

No Antecedent

Ex: Because of extreme weather conditions, starvation exists in some countries where they (people) must struggle to stay alive.

Ex: In the report released by the committee, it stated that the significant budget cuts would be necessary for the following year.

(The report released by the committee stated that significant budget cuts would be necessary for the following year).

Ambiguous Antecedent

Ex: Afraid that they would be late to the party, Jenny and Kate decided to take her (Kate’s) car rather than walk.

Antecedents = Nouns or Gerunds Only 

Do it = Wrong
Do so = Right 

Ex: Activists who defend endangered species from poaching do it (so) on the grounds that such animals, once gone, are irreplaceable. 

What does ‘it’ refer to in this sentence? Defending endangered species. But since the word ‘defending’ doesn’t actually appear in the sentence, ‘it’ has no real antecedent.

Important:

For both Subject-Verb Agreement and Pronoun Agreement, be on the lookout for collective nouns such as group, committee, company, jury, city, agency, team, etc. These nouns are always considered singular, and it is not uncommon for the SAT to pair them with plural verbs and pronouns. Whenever one of these words appears, you should immediately be suspicious.

IT = BAD (most likely). If the word “it” is underlined, it’s most likely wrong. Check its antecedent immediately.

5) Adjective vs. Adverb

Adjectives modify nouns (The good boy; The loud noise, etc.)

Adverbs modify verbs and adjectives and usually end in –ly: He speaks slowly; She runs quickly, etc. 

On the SAT, adverbs and adjectives are switched only with one another. If an adjective is underlined, stick in the adverb; if an adverb is underlined, stick in the adjective.

Ex: The patient recovered quick (quickly), although he had been very ill earlier in the week.

Ex: Because the man’s clothing seemed oddly (odd), he attracted a number of stares.


6) Parallelism

A. Lists

In any given list, each item should be in the exact same format. Either noun, noun, noun, verb, verb, verb, or gerund, gerund, gerund. Any deviation is incorrect. 

Ex: Susan likes to run, swim, and going (go) horseback riding.

B. Binary (Two-Part) Parallelism

This kind of parallel structure more common on Fixing Sentences, but (somewhat easier) versions of it do show up on Error-IDs pretty regularly. 

The construction on one side of a conjunction must match the construction on the other side of the conjunction as closely as possible. If one side contains  noun + of + noun, the other must contain noun + of + noun; if one side contains a gerund, the other must contain a gerund, etc.

Ex: The researchers called for strict enforcement of existing tobacco regulations as well as investigating (an investigation of) teenagers’ motivations for smoking.


7) Prepositions

Certain expressions always require certain prepositions. For example, one has a familiarity with something, not a familiarity in something. Because they are idiomatic, reposition questions must be done by ear; there is no way to anticipate what preposition will appear on a given test.

Ex: A familiarity in (with) Latin is useful for anyone who wishes to pursue serious study of a modern romance language.


8) Faulty Comparisons

Compare things to things and people to people.

Ex: In ancient Greece, women were not allowed to vote or hold property, their status differing from slaves (from that of slaves) only in name.

Ex: At the age of twenty-four, playwright Thornton Wilder was balding and bespectacled, and his clothes were like a much older man (like those of a much older man).


9) Comparatives vs. Superlatives (More vs. Most)

More/-er form of adjective = 2 items being compared
Most/-est form of adjective = 3+ items being compared

Ex: Between the tiger and the lion, the tiger is the faster animal, while the hippo is the most ferocious (more ferocious).

Ex: Hurricane Katrina was one of the more (most) destructive storms of the last hundred years.


10) Double Negatives, Double Positives

Double Negative

Ex: There is scarcely/hardly no (any) milk left in the refrigerator.

Double Positive  

Ex: Jane thought that Susan's blouse was more prettier (prettier) than her own.


11) Word Pairs

A. Either...Or

Either the politician or his aide will speak to the media this afternoon.

B. Neither...Nor

Neither the politician nor his aide will speak to the media this afternoon.

C. Not only...But Also

Not only the politician but also his aide will speak to the media this afternoon.

D. Both...And

Both the politician and his aide will speak to the media this afternoon.

E. Between…And

Between the politician and his aide, the latter is far more interesting to listen to.

E. As...As

The aide is as interesting a speaker as the politician.

F. More/Less…Than

The politician’s aid is a more interesting speaker than the politician himself.

G. So/Such…That

The politician was such a boring speaker that half the audience fell asleep.

H. From…To

The politician’s speech covered topics ranging from the economy to the environment. 

I. Just as…So (Rare)

Just as the politician’s speech put half the audience to sleep, so did the commentator’s remarks cause the other half to begin yawning.

J. At once...And (Rare, usually correct when it appears)

The politician’s speech was at once intriguing because of its content and dull because of the monotone in which it was delivered.


12) Noun Agreement

Hint: Look for professions

Ex: Jenny and Robert want to become a scientist (scientists) when they grow up.

Ex: The Wikipedia has joined the Encyclopedia Britannica as favorite sources (as a favorite source) for research.


13) Relative Pronouns

Who/That vs. Which

Ex: Known for his many wives, King Henry VIII was a British monarch which (who/that) ruled during the Tudor period.

-When "which" appears by itself, it is usually incorrect; preposition + which (e.g. "in which") is usually correct.

-"Which" is always preceded by a comma; ‘That’ is never preceded by a comma

Correct: The movie that opened last Friday has earned rave reviews from critics.

BUT 

Correct: The movie, which opened last Friday, has earned rave reviews from critics. 

Very Important: Who vs. Whom is not actually tested on the SAT. "Who" is only switched with "which." If "whom" is underlined, ignore it. 

Other Relative Pronouns

When is for Time

Where is for Places (It is incorrect to say, "The story where....") 


14) Coordinating Conjunctions (and vs. but)

When conjunctions are underlined, make sure that they connect the two halves of the sentences logically. Ideas that are being continued need transitions like “and,” and ideas that are being contradicted need transitions like “but.”

Ex: People with a certain rare disease are unable to feel physical pain, and (but) this does not mean that they are unable to feel other kinds of pain.


15) Usage (Rare, 1 per test maximum)

Ex: The tall buildings were just barely visual (visible) from the outskirts of the city.


16) Redundancy (Rare, 1 per test maximum)

Ex: According to recent reports, the collapse of the country’s government is imminent and could occur in the future. 

SAT Writing: Rules For Fixing Sentences (Complete SAT Grammar Rules Part 2)

Fixing Sentences 

The following rules provide a general set of guidelines for the Fixing Sentences portion of the Writing section. 

Rules for picking answers:

1) Shorter is better: 
Always start by looking at the shortest answer 

2) -ING (esp. Being) is BAD
Gerunds create sentence fragments

3) Passive Voice is BAD 
Active: I drink the water; Passive: the water is drunk by me
The passive voice makes sentences wordy and awkward.


Major Issues Tested


Sentence Fragments 

Incorrect: The book being banned from a number of schools because it was so controversial.

Incorrect: The book that was banned from a number of schools because it was so controversial.

Correct: The book was banned from a number of schools because it was so controversial.


Commas and Semicolons 

Coordinating (aka FANBOYS) conjunction: 

For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So

Coordinating Conjunctions are used to join 2 complete sentences (independent clauses):

Sentence 1: It is very sunny today
Sentence 2: It is also very cold

Joined: It is very sunny today, but it is also very cold.

If a comma is used to join two Independent Clauses, the result is what's known as a Comma Splice. Comma splices are always incorrect.

Comma Splice: It is very sunny today, it is also very cold. 

Important: When two Independent Clauses that have the same subject are joined with a Coordinating Conjunction without repeating the second subject, no comma is necessary before the Coordinating Conjunction.

Correct: It is very sunny today but also very cold. 

Incorrect: It is very sunny today, but also very cold. 


Semicolons 

Semicolons essentially function like periods. They are used to separate two independent clauses when no conjunction is present.

Example: It is very sunny today; it is also very cold. 

A semicolon preceding a Coordinating Conjunction is always incorrect.

Incorrect: It is very sunny today; but it is also very cold. 

There are four transitions that should always be preceded by a semicolon when they appear at the beginning of a clause:

1) However
2) Therefore
3) Moreover
4) Consequently

Correct: It is very sunny today; however, it is also very cold.

Incorrect: It is very sunny today, however, it is also very cold.

So to sum up, in order to be successful on the Fixing Sentences section, you must be absolutely solid on the the four basic ways of combining independent clauses:

Sentence: 1: The book is very long.
Sentence 2: It is also very interesting.

1) The book is very long, but it is also very interesting.

2) The book is very long; it is also very interesting.

3) The book is very long; however, it is also very interesting.

4) The book is very long but is also very interesting


Dangling Modifiers 

Rule: Always place modifiers as close as possible to the nouns they modify. 

Incorrect: Having resigned for personal reasons, the ambassador's successor will probably be named tomorrow

Who resigned?

The ambassador. So "The ambassador" is the subject.

Therefore, the ambassador MUST be the first words after the comma

Correct: Having resigned for personal reasons, the ambassador plans to name his successor tomorrow


Misplaced Modifiers (Rare) 

Incorrect: John found his keys running down the street. (It sounds as if the keys are running along the street)

Correct: While running down the street, John found his keys.


Gerunds/Wordiness

Incorrect: The book was banned from a number of schools because of it being so controversial.

Correct: The book was banned from a number of schools because it was so controversial.


Parenthetical (Non-Essential) Clauses 

Incorrect: The book, which was banned from a number of schools, and it was highly controversial.

Correct: The book, which was banned from a number of schools, was highly controversial.

Important: If a sentence contains a correctly used parenthetical clause and does not contain another grammatical error, it is correct, no matter how odd it may sound (e.g. "A cure for some cancers, scientists believe, may be found within the next decade").


Parallelism

Lists (Easy)

Incorrect: I like biking, swimming, and to play soccer

Correct: I like biking, swimming, and playing soccer

"Binary" or Two-Part Parallelism (Hard - usually last question of section)

Incorrect: Jessye Norman is an American opera singer who is known for the emotional impact of her singing and her intellectual command of her music is impressive.

Correct: Jessye Norman is an American opera singer who is known for the emotional impact of her singing as well as for her impressive intellectual command of her music. 


Error-ID Categories that also appear on Fixing Sentences:

-Subject-Verb Agreement (Typically subject-prepositional-phrase verb) 

-Antecedent Pronoun (Watch out for It, Which, and This, which often lack antecedents) 

-Verb Tense (esp. Tense Consistency) 

-Conjunctions (and vs. but/however) 

-Faulty Comparisons (always fix with that of/those of) 

-Word Pairs (esp. between...and, so...that, just as...so, not only...but also)